Question

请根据提示信息，适当发挥想象，以“My best friend”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

李涛，13岁, 个子比我高，但视力不好，常戴一副小圆眼镜。

喜欢听音乐……

乐于助人，长大后想当一名医生，以帮助更多的人。

我们俩希望上学晚，放学早，有更多业余时间……

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Litao is my best friend. He is thirteen years old. He is neither too thin nor too fat. He is taller than me, but he has poor eyesight, because he likes watching TV and reading books in bed. He always wears a pair of round glasses. He likes listening to music and playing basketball. He studies hard and is good at every subject. He is helpful and kind to others. He hopes to become a doctor in the future then he can help more people . We both hope to go to school later and finish classes earlier, so that we can have more free time. We’ll be good friends forever.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时来描写人物，所以在写作时，要尤其注意一般现在时的表达方式。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: neither…nor… , in the future, so that，还有注意比较级和一些连接词的用法。 学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。