Question

【题目】书面表达。

学校“男神女神墙”上榜人物评选活动正在火热进行中，请你推荐一个心目中的人选(可以是同学、老师或自己)。

内容包括：

1、姓名、年龄。

2、体育爱好、饮食习惯(各举至少一个例子)。

3、喜爱的(或任教的)学科。

注：书写工整、卷面整洁，文中不得出现真实姓名及班级。(60词左右)

Hello, everyone, I have a right person(合适人选) for this “wall(墙)”.

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Hello, everyone, I have a right person(合适人选) for this “wall(墙)”. She is my classmate, and her name is Lucy. She is thirteen years old. She is good at playing the guitar. She also likes playing basketball. After school, she often play it with her friends. Her favorite subject is English, because she thinks it is interesting. She often helps us learn English.She has a healthy eating habit. She likes eating vegetable and fruit. She is outgoing and she is always friendly to us. So we all love her.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，介绍自己心目中一个男神或女神。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： Her name is…，She is…, She also likes…, Her favorite subject is..., because she thinks…等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意根据提纲要求适当发挥。写作中要注意主谓一致。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我心目中女神的名字，接下来介绍她的特长和爱好：音乐、体育、最喜欢的学科、性格，最后表达我们都喜欢她。此处be good at, play the guitar, like doing sth, play basketball, help sb do sth, be friendly to 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。