Question

【题目】书面表达：

在英语课上，同学们就自己喜欢的旅游方式展开了讨论。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。

团队旅游	◆有导游，不会迷路 ◆不必自己找旅馆 ◆结识朋友，相互帮助
个人旅游	◆自由安排时间 ◆选择自己喜欢的旅游景点 ◆学会照顾自己
你的想法	……

注意：1. 文章必须包括表中全部内容，可适当增加细节；

2. 想法至少在两句以上；

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4. 词数：80—100。

参考词汇：团队旅游travel with a group; 个人旅游travel alone; 安排arrange

Recently, we have discussed the ways to go traveling. Here is the result. Some students choose a travel with a group.

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, we have discussed the ways to go traveling. Here is the result. Some students choose to travel with a group. With a guide’s help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while traveling.

However, other students prefer to travel alone. That’s because they can arrange their time freely and choose to visit their favorite sights. What’s more, it’s a chance for them to look after themselves.

For me, I’d like to travel alone. I want to spend enough time visiting the places I like. In this way, I can enjoy my vacation better.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求根据表的内容，用英语写一篇短文汇报讨论结果，并谈谈自己的想法。。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如With a guide’s help, they won’t get lost and they don’t need to look for hotels by themselves. Besides, they can make friends and help each other while traveling.句式it’s a chance for them to look after themselves.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。