题目内容
【题目】话题作文.
63.在每个人的成长过程中,都或多或少有一些变化,请以How I’ve Changed! 为题写一段话,介绍一下你的过去与现在的不同。(70~100词)
How I’ve Changed!
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【答案】How I've changed!
My life changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short and have long hair ,but now I am tall and have short hair . I used to be quiet and shy, now I am very outgoing. I used to be afraid of dark, now I am not. I used to be heavy ,now I am thin and healthy .
My daily life is different and I used to like different things when I was a child. For example, I didn't use to like tests. Now, I don't mind them. I used to hate gym class. Now it's my favorite class. I used to walk to school. Now I take the bus .When I was young, I used to have so much time to play with my friends, but now I am really too busy. I have to get up early and stay in school all day ,then I go right home and eat dinner at night. I used to watch TV with my parent or chat with my grandmother , but now I can't. I love sports ,but now, I hardly ever have time to play sport. I have to do lots of homework . I really miss the old days!
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以How I’ve Changed为题目,介绍一下自己成长过程中发生的变化。这是一篇话题作文,只给出了写作的题目,而具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力,组织语言,串联成文。人成长的过程中都会发生变化,这些变化有外表上的,也有内心里的,因此写作时,可以从不同的方面来进行介绍,如你外貌上的变化,身高、体重、发型等等;还有性格爱好的变化,当然更重要的是心理上的,如你对生活、朋友、学习等的态度。这些材料都可以成为学生们写作的内容。叙述时,需分清层次,使表达有条理。通过分析可知,这篇短文的时态应该包括一般现在时和一般过去时,注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时,还应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语,而应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子,以简单句句式为主,穿插使用并列句或复合句以及一些高级句型和复杂结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文意连贯、表达流畅。