题目内容
【题目】根据要求完成大作文。词数:80-100词。
每个人对于生活都心怀美好的憧憬和期盼。你的期盼是什么呢?将下面题目补充完整,谈一谈你的期盼并简单说明理由。
要求:
1.语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
I’m looking forward to
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【答案】例文
I'm looking forward to the summer vacation
Summer vacation is coming. I'm going on a new journey. You can’t imagine how excited I am. I am looking forward to having a wonderful vacation.
In order to get ready for the exam, I have studied hard for nearly several yeas. It is hard work, but I never give up. Now it's time for me to have a good rest.
I am going to climb the mountains with my good friends. And I'll also, go to the beach. It must be very relaxing. Duly’s family and I plan to visit some historical places like Beijing or Xi’an. We will stay there for at least two weeks. I will stay at home help my parents with more housework, too. It is a good chance for me to do something for them. I can’t wait.
【解析】
本文属于话题作文,谈论你的期盼并说明理由。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
亮点说明:这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如look forward to doing, in order to, get ready for, give up, it’s time to do, plan to do, at least, help sb with sth, a good chance to do以及how excited I am中how引导的感叹句,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。