请以 “My dream home 为题.按以下内容要点写一篇80字左右的短文1.我与父母一起住在一个小城镇,我们的公寓在四楼 2有三个卧室.一个客厅.一个厨房和一个浴室,我有自己的卧室3.我家周围有超市.饭馆.医院等.邻居很友好和乐于助人.4.每周六.我们在社区中心举行“援助之手会.那儿的医生和护士帮助生病的人.工程师帮助我们修洗衣机.冰箱� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

题目内容

请以 “My dream home”为题，按以下内容要点写一篇80字左右的短文

1.我与父母一起住在一个小城镇；我们的公寓在四楼

2有三个卧室、一个客厅、一个厨房和一个浴室；我有自己的卧室

3.我家周围有超市、饭馆、医院等。邻居很友好和乐于助人。

4.每周六，我们在社区中心举行“援助之手”会。那儿的医生和护士帮助生病的人，工程师帮助我们修洗衣机、冰箱等。生活在这样的街区是幸福的。

注意：（1）要点清楚，语言流畅，字数80词左右

（2）短文须包括所有要点内容，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥。

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John is the only son of his father.Usually his father’s driver drives him to school in his father’s beautiful car.Then he takes John’s father to his office.One evening his father tells him that he has to go to the airport early the next day,so he would need the car at the same time when John has to go to school.He says that John’s mother has another car.But she would still be in bed when he has to leave the house.

“Oh,well,how will I go to school if you need your car and Mum is still in bed?”John asks.His father wants to teach him a lesson about how difficult the life is for the poor people in the world,so he answers, “You will go in the same way as every other child in the world…go in a taxi.”

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料比较具体，动笔前应认真阅读要点，根据要点组织材料，确定写作内容。写作中注意不要遗漏要点，适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。注意用适当的过渡词或句子从而做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文用了好的一些短语或句式，如：Usually his father’s driver drives him to school in his father’s beautiful car. he would need the car at the same time when John has to go to school及His father wants to teach him a lesson about how difficult the life is for the poor people in the world同时短文也用了一些连词如：when、if、and或so等。提醒考生学生平时注意积累一些短语和句式。

考点：提纲作文。