题目内容
书面表达(15分)
假如上周末你和班上的同学到西山公园(Xishan Park)玩得很快乐。请以为题,根据下面的提示写一篇短文,要点提示:
1.时间:星期天早上8点。
2.学校门口集合(get together),骑自行车到达目的地大约30分钟。
3.有拍照,游戏,野餐(have a picnic)等活动。
4.大家度过一个愉快的周末。
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My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmate and I went to Xishan Park. It was so interesting.
At 8:00 on Sunday morning, we got together at the school gate. When everyone arrived, we started. We liked riding, se we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes’ ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took many beautiful photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot. We all had a happy weekend.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇让我们写一篇去西山公园的短文。文章提出了四个要点,时间,地点,活动和感受。另外,写作时,小作者还注意了语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如And we took many beautiful photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic.等。
考点:提纲类作文。