Question

书面表达。（本题共15分）

假如你有一位朋友叫Jenny Brown, 请你向大家介绍一下她的情况吧！

要求：1. 必须包含表格中的要点。

2. 可适当增加其他要点。

3. 字数不少于60词。

Name	Jenny Brown
Age	13
Class	Class 5, Grade 7
Telephone number	0576-86333216
Birthday	April 15
Favorite food	hamburgers
Favorite subject	English interesting
Hobby(爱好)	basketball relaxing

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My Friend Jenny

In school,my good friend is Jenny.She is an out-going girl.She has long hair and two beautiful eyes.she is Thirteen years old and she is in Class 5,Grade 7.Her telephone number is 0576-86333216 .Her birthday is on April 15th.Her favourite food is hamburgers.Her favourite subject is English.She thinks it is interesting.she wants to be an English teacher in the future.She likes playing basketball best.She thinks it is relaxing.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇短文要求小作者介绍自己朋友的情况。小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如Her favourite subject is English.She thinks it is interesting.she wants to be an English teacher in the future.She likes playing basketball best.She thinks it is relaxing.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理.

考点：考查提纲类作文。