Question

【题目】学校正在举办一场赞美家乡的英语征文活动，假如你想参加，请以嘉兴为例介绍一下自己的家乡：

	Jiaxing
Location	In the east of China
Old	old
Population	Over 4.5 million
Famous places	The South Lake, Yuehe Street, Wuzhen…
weather
…	…

要求：（1）包括表格中的要点。

（2）可适当增加内容。

（3）80词左右，语句通顺、语法正确。

My home town

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Answer 1

【答案】My hometown is Jiaxing. It is in the the east of China. Jiaxing is an old history city. It was built about 6,000 years ago. Jiaxing’s Population is over 4.5 million. Jiaxing has also interesting places, such as the South Lake, Yuehe Street, Wuzhen and so on. The weather here is hot in summer and cold in winter. The people here are friendly and hardworking. There are lots of delicious foods. If you cometo Jiaxing, you will fall love in it. Welcome everyone to jiaxing.

【解析】这篇短文要求我们介绍自己的家乡—嘉兴。题目中利用表格给出了关于嘉兴的一些信息，我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，包括地理位置、人口、著名的地方、天气情况等等。表格中提供的信息非常简单，有的还没有具体的内容，因此这就需要学生们自己来组织语言，将文章的内容补充完整，并注意文章的条理性。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，注意谓语动词的单复数形式的变化，并且正确使用be动词的形式。写作时，要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，多使用简单句，辅以并列句和复合句，这样可以使文章更富有节奏感。句子之间使用一些过渡词汇，增强文章的连贯性。