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请根据下列提示以“My best friend”为题写一篇短文。

我的好朋友名叫Mike。他是一个出色的男孩,会为朋友保守秘密。

他在8年级,作业比我少。

上周他们进行了一次到太湖(Tai Lake) 的旅行,花了他们大约半小时到达那里,他们在那里玩得很开心。

他参加DIY课程,并把一些照片放在自己的主页上让每个人看。

长大后,他想……。(适当发挥1—2句)

 

 

 

 

 

My best friend

I have a good friend,his name is TMike.Mike is an honest boy.He is always ready to keep secrets for friends .He is in Grade 8.He doesn’t have so much homework to do. He hopes he can have enough time to do outdoor activities.Last week,he went on a trip to Tai Lake.It took him about half an hour to get there. He had a good time there.He took a DIY lesson.He also put some photos on his homepage so that everyone can have a look at them.He want to be a reporter when he grow up.

【解析】

试题分析:这是一篇提纲作文。写作文之前要认真审题。把握好人称,时态。在写作时,要保证题中所罗列的要点都要能够准确的表达出来。注意人称、时态及主谓一致问题。写作中注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容涵盖了题目要求的所有要点,表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了一般现在时和一般过去时,文章脉络清晰,自然流畅。同时,文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语,这为文章增色不少。在学习中注意积累,掌握一些常用句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点:提纲作文。

 

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Traveling is one of the most important activities and people have been interested in it for many years. Modern traffic develops fast, so traveling to different places has become much faster than before. Staying healthy while traveling can make your trip better. But do you know how to keep healthy during a trip? The following information may be useful to you.

Before leaving

Wear comfortable shoes, a hat and sunglasses.

Take some necessary medicine with you. They can be used when you get sick or have other problems.

Do some exercise for weeks or months before you leave if you plan to do lots of walking or climbing during your trip.

Prepare proper food. Before you prepare the food, the first thing you need to think about is how long you will travel with the food. If you take a long trip, you should bring food such as bread, biscuits and some fruit. They don’t go bad quickly. For a nearer trip people can bring meat, fish, eggs, milk and even salads and vegetables.

While traveling

Be sure not to eat dirty food or bad fruit.

Have enough time to take a rest during your trip.

Tap water is not safe, so drink bottled water and always clean the cover of the bottle.

Keep food in good condition. If you take hot food, you should try to keep it hot. For example, you can put it in heavy towels. If you need to keep cold food cold, you can put cold food in a box with ice. When you arrive, put cold food in the fridge. Remember: If you travel with food, keep hot food hot and cold food cold.

How to Keep 1.___ During a Trip

Before leaving

Wear comfortable shoes, a hat and sunglasses

2._ some necessary medicine with you.

Exercise for weeks or months before you leave

Prepare proper food. take bread, biscuits and some fruit for a 3.__ trip or bring meat, fish, eggs, milk and even salads and vegetables for a nearer one.

While 4.____

5.___ eat dirty food or bad fruit.

Have enough time to take a rest during your trip.

Drink bottled water and always clean the cover.

Keep food in good condition. Try to keep hot food hot and cold food cold.

 

 

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