Question

书面表达。（15分）

假设你是Kitty，你要给在美国上学的好朋友Sun写一封关于你的学校和学校生活的信，根据下面的要求用英语写一篇80字左右的短文。

要点如下：

1、学校又大又现代化，你的教室在一楼。

2、学校离家不远，每天步行上学，上学从不迟到。

3、喜欢英语和数学。

4、听音乐，玩游戏，周二去图书馆看书。

5、和同学一起看球赛，在操场上进行课外活动。

6、喜爱学校的原因…（一点即可）

注意： 对所给要点，不要逐字逐句翻译，要有适当发挥。

Dear Sun,

Thanks for your letter. Let me tell you about my school.

 

 

 

Best wishes

Kitty

 

Answer 1

Dear Sun,

Thank you for your email. Let me tell you about my school. I study at No. 1 Middle School. Our school is big and modern. It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day. I’m never late for school. My classroom is on the ground/first floor. We usually do morning exercises first. The lessons start at 8. My classmates are all very nice. We chat with each other in our free time. I always have a good time at school. Welcome to my school.

Best wishes

Kitty

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者介绍自己的学校和学校生活的情况。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型，如It takes me half an hour to get to school by bus every day. My classmates are all very nice. We chat with each other in our free time. I always have a good time at school.有一些好的固定短语还有连词。
考点：提纲类作文。