Question

【题目】书面表达

英语课上，同学们正在准备举行以“我最好的朋友”为话题的演讲活动。请你以Tom的名义写一篇演讲稿，向同学们介绍一下你最好的朋友。

要求：1、参考提示语，可适当发挥；

2、语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

3、文中不得出现任何真实信息；

4、词数:不少于70词；（开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。

要求：1.What does your friend look like?

2.How is he/she different from you?

3.Why do you like him/her?

Hello,everyone!

I am Tom and I am very happy to stand here to talk about my best friend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thanks for listening!

Answer 1

【答案】Hello,everyone!

I am Tom and I am very happy to stand here to talk about my best friend Lily. Lily is a Chinese girl. She is tall and has long straight hair. She is outgoing and always tells funny stories. She is different from me. I am a little serious. She likes music and dancing best, but I didn’t like them at first. She often sings and dances when we are together. Now I like music. She also tells stories to us and makes us laugh. When I am together with her, I will feel very happy. She is good at Chinese. I usually communicate with her in Chinese. I have improved my pronunciation.I am no longer afraid to speak Chinese, too. So friends needn't to be the same. Friends are like books—you don't need a lot of them as long as they are good.

Thanks for listening!

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文。以“我最好的朋友” 为话题写一篇演讲稿。由于在要点中只给出了写作的大致方向，需要自己发挥的地方较多。动笔前要围绕主题组织材料，审清主题，确定时态主要词汇等问题。列出本文的写作提纲。写作中可适当使用连词，注意表达顺序，表达要有条理性，语句通顺，意思连贯，要符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。本文提纲：

大家好！

我叫汤姆，我很高兴站在这里和谈谈我最好的朋友莉莉。莉莉是个中国女孩。她个子高，头发又长又直。她很外向，总是讲有趣的故事。她和我不一样。我有点严肃。她最喜欢音乐和舞蹈，但起初我不喜欢他们。我们在一起时，她经常唱歌跳舞。现在我有点喜欢音乐。她也给我们讲故事，让我们大笑。当我和她在一起时，我会感到非常高兴。她擅长汉语。我通常用中文和她交流。我的发音已经提高，我也不再害怕说汉语了。所以朋友不必一样。朋友就像书，只要他们好，你就不需要很多。

谢谢你的聆听！