题目内容
【题目】根据所提供的信息,写一篇关于我邻居Bob的短文。
基本情况 | 1978年10月10日出生,中等身材,住在我家隔壁 |
喜好 | 喜爱听音乐,因为……;爱好运动,最崇拜…… |
品质 | 乐于助人,积极参加活动,热衷慈善,,已经筹集一千多元,准备寄给贫困地区的学生 得到高度赞扬,我们以他为荣。 |
梦想 | 成为一个有名的演员,在电影中扮演主角,…… 希望自己的成就超出电影业,并把大部分时间致力于…… |
要求:1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.要点须包括表格中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
3.词数:100词左右。
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【答案】
My neighbour
I have a neighbour named Bob. He was born on October 10th, 1978. He is of medium height and he is a kind person. He gets along well with everyone. He likes listening to music. He thinks it is relaxing. He also likes watching sports programs. He always listens to sports news on Sunday evenings. He most admires the sports star Jordan.
He is willing to help others and takes an active party in activities. He loves charity, he has raised more than one thousand yuan. He is ready to send it to the students in poor areas. He is highly praised and we are proud of him.
He likes acting. He wants to be a famous actor and play the leading role in the film. He hopes he can get ahead of the film industry and spend most of my time working on it.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们根据表格中的内容介绍一下自己的邻居Bob。在表格中给出了关于Bob的详细信息,包括Bob的基本情况、爱好、成就以及未来的梦想。我们需要用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。通过分析可知,这篇短文写作时需要注意时态的变化,应该是一般现在时和一般过去时结合使用。另外,仍需注意表达的流畅和连贯,多使用连词,长短句结合,使文章有节奏感。
写作亮点:范文中出现一些常见短语, 如:likes doing喜欢做某事,be willing to乐意做某事, be ready to准备好做某事; 句式也较丰富,如:被动句He is highly praised and we are proud of him,宾语从句等, 使文章的表达更具逻辑性、更富条理。