Question

13．假如你是李华．你在向英国笔友Peter介绍参观北京科技馆的活动．请你用英语写一封电子邮
件．简要叙述参观的过程，以及你的感受．
．提示词语：the Beijing Science and Technology Museum （in Chaoyang District），take，excited，in?
ventions，scientific exhibitions，experiment
提示问题：●Where is the Bejing Science and Technology Museum？
●Who did you go with？What did you do there？
●How did you feel？
Dear Peter，
How is it going？
I'm writing to tell you my visit to the Bejing Science and Technology Museum．
                                                                 
Yours，Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
①Although we were very excited②when we saw the museum，we went into the museum in two lines．
虽然当我们看见博物馆的时候很兴奋，但是我们还是排成两队进去的．
①although引导的让步状语从句．
②when引导的时间状语从句，当…时．
【高分句型二】
After we got into it，we saw many new inventions and scientific exhibitions．
当我进去后，我们看见了很多新发明和科学展览．
after引导的时间状语从句，在…之后．

解答 Dear Peter，
How is it going？I'm writing to tell you my visit to the Beijing Science and Technology Museum．The Beijing Science and Technology Museum is in Chaoyang District．（位置）Last Sunday I visited it with my classmates．We started off at six from Pinggu．It took us an hour and a half to get there by bus．Although we were very excited when we saw the museum，we went into the museum in two lines．【高分句型一】After we got into it，we saw many new inventions and scientific exhibitions．【高分句型二】We listened to the teacher there carefully and got a lot from their clear explanation．Then we took some photos and did some experiments．Each of us had a good time．（一起去的人和所做的事情）
On my way back，we still talked about the visit．I felt quite happy and hoped to visit it again in the future．（我的感受）
Yours
Li Hua

点评 写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词，注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯．