Question

【题目】近年来，我国校园欺凌事件屡有发生，而遭受校园欺凌的学生容易情绪抑郁、焦虑，不 敢去学校，甚至会出现心理问题等严重后果。 请以 “My opinions about school bullying” 为题， 写一篇英语短文，谈谈你的看法。

提示：

1. What do you think of school bullying?

2. What will you do if you are bullied or you see somebody else being bullied?

要求：

1. 所给提示信息应全部包括，可适当发挥，以 使行文连贯；

2. 80词以上。

参考词汇：心理问题mental health problems .

My opinions about school bullying

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Answer 1

【答案】My opinions about school bullying

School bullying is a big problem that has got more and more attention in society. Being bullied can make students feel scared or upset. Some students are afraid of going to school. School bullying can even lead to more serious mental health problems. So how should we stop school bullying?

If I see somebody being bullied or I am bullied, I will tell the teachers or my parents at once. It is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，谈谈你对校园欺凌的看法。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如make sb do, be afraid of, lead to, mental health problem, at once, on one’s own, it is not a good idea to do any bad things to the bullies on my own中it作形式主语以及“比较级and比较级”。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。