Question

【题目】写作

现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生活（low-carbon life)”，即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。

提示词语：be good for,everyone,ride a bike,think,make a difference,environment,suggest,reuse

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Answer 1

【答案】Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment,I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides,I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it's my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we'd better not spend much money on expensive

clothes.

If everyone does something for the environment,I believe the earth will be a better place

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，针对“低碳生活”你的做法、感受以及建议。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be good for, help with, instead of, besides, make a difference, as long as possible, had better do, it is my duty to。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。