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请以“My Day”为题写一篇短文叙述一下自己一天的生活学习状况．中心应明确，切忌写成“流水帐”，要求100词左右．

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学生：习作： My Day 　　I get up at five in the morning. Then I wash my face and brush my tooth(X1). I have a breakfast(X2) at six then I go to school by a bike(X3). I get to school at about seven. Class begin(X4) at eight. me have eight classes every day. Me have lunch in the middle of the day. 　　School are over(X5) at about four in the afternoon. After school We clean our classroom Then we go home. 　　We have supper at about six. After supper I do my homework. I go to bed at nine in the evening. 　　This is my day. How busy I am! 　　剖析：1．tooth应改用复数形式teeth． 　　2．三餐饭前一般不用冠词，所以a应去掉． 　　3．by bike是固定用法，应把bike前的a去掉． 　　4．主谓的数要一致，可改为Class begins或Classes begin． 　　5．School是单数，所以be用单数is． 　　总评：作者以时间为顺序叙述了自己一天的学习情况，行文流畅，中心明确．但对英语基础知识，尚需努力学习．