Question

【题目】书面表达 （满分15分）

Emily将她的烦恼写在了博客上并征求大家的建议。假设你叫陈华，在了解她的烦恼后请写一个回复给出你的建议，要求字数在90词左右，信件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总字数。

建议应包括：（1）孩子应尊重父母（2）父母经验丰富（3）父母的要求是对你的成长有好处的（4）...... （5）多同父母交流沟通。

提示词: respect v & n. 尊重; responsible adj. 有责任感的; demand v. & n. 要求

Here are Emily's problems on the Blog: My problem is my parents. They never stop going on about(唠叨) how I should keep my room clean, keep my hair tidy and wear smart clothes. They even make me do the washing-up after dinner every night! None of my friends have got such terrible parents. What should I do? Emily，USA

Dear Emily，

I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents. __________________________

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Chen Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Hi, Emily. I think it's lucky for you to have such good parents. You should understand and respect them, and do what they ask you to do. They have richer experience and better advice for young people. As your parents, they surely hope you become an excellent person. Their demands are helpful for your growing up.

Every member should be responsible and do something for the family. So you should do what you can do, such as keep your room clean and do the washing-up. Remember: Learning by doing.

You should keep your hair tidy and wear smart clothes. Teenagers should look like teenagers.

Anyway, if you have any problems, just talk with your parents.

Chen Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文所给材料比较详细其中一条建议是自己的发挥。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第二人称，注意提建议的句型应用。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的复合句和短语，为文章增色.如复合句do what they ask you to do，So you should do what you can do，Anyway, if you have any problems, just talk with your parents等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。