Question

2．Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation．（根据所给情景写一封不少于60词的信，不少于60字．标点符号不占格）
Suppose  you are jack．Your friend Mary is upset  because she has failed in a PE test．What do you
 think？Try to give her some advice on how to train herself．（假如你是Jack，你的朋友Mary由于没有通过体育测试而感到难过．请给她写一封信．谈谈你的看法，并给她一些怎样锻炼自己的建议．）
 Dear Mary，
                                                                                                                               Yours，Jack．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
First，keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful．首先，提醒自己保持平静是最有帮助的．
这里keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace 是动名词短语做主语，the most helpful是helpful的最高级形式．
【高分句型二】
Second，it will help you to relax if you spend some time doing some after school activities like sports．其次，如果你抽出时间做一些课外活动，比如体育运动，将会帮助你放松一下．
句子中if引导一个条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时，spend time doing sth花费时间做某事

解答 Dear Mary，
I am sorry to hear that you  has failed in a PE test．Knowing that you are sad about the result，I am quite worried．Actually，the most important thing is not the result of the exam but the learning journey．（引出话题）
　　There are some effective ways to calm down．First，keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful（高分句型）．Second，it will help you to relax if you spend some time doing some after school activities like sports（高分句型）．Talk to your parents and friends，who are always ready to comfort you．Finally，make a plan to exercise．As for the game you are weak in，you should exercise more．In a word，the result itself is not really important，but we should work hard while learning．（我的看法及建议）
                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                        Jack．

点评 动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，句子要通顺连贯，没有语法错误．