Question

11．"骑行"这一低碳环保的休闲运动受到越来越多人的青睐．"骑行"既是一种运动，又能保护环境，减少污染．请以"Enjoying Cycling"为题，写一篇90词左右的英语短文，介绍骑行的好处和注意事项．
--骑行的好处（save energy，strong，less pollution，easy to park）
Enjoying Cycling---注意事项（traffic rules，safe，not…too fast）
---发出倡议（let's，good，healthy）
温馨提示：短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．
Enjoying Cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people．
                                                     

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
sometimes we may cause traffic accidents if we are not careful enough如果我们不够小心，我们可能有时候会引起交通事故．
if引导的条件状语从句．
【高分句型二】
It's important for us to obey the traffic rules对于我们来说遵守交通规则是重要的．
it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 Enjoy Cycling
Nowadays cycling is becoming more and more popular with young people．It's a useful sport and it helps to keep us fit．It doesn't cause air pollution．It can help us save energy．What's more，cycling costs less．When we are cycling，we feel active and relaxed．It's full of fun．（好处）
However，sometimes we may cause traffic accidents if we are not careful enough【高分句型一】．So we should keep safe on the road．We shouldn't ride too fast．Remember to wear bicycle helmets when riding．It's important for us to obey the traffic rules．【高分句型二】（注意事项）Let's get on bicycles and enjoy cycling!（倡议）

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