Question

书面表达。（15分）

老人跌倒该不该扶，敢不敢扶，一度成为社会热点。针对这一话题，人们做了一个调查。下面是调查结果，请你据此写一篇文章。

 

内容要点：

1. 调查结果是什么？

2. 你认为是否该去帮助跌倒老人, 请说明原因。 如果该帮助，那你会怎么帮？

3. 号召大家对需要帮助的人施以援手。

要求：

不能出现真实姓名和校名。

字数80字左右，文章开头已给出。

We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down, and here are the results. ______________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

We did a survey about whether we should help the old when they fall down, and here are the results.Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old, while 42% of people refuse to help the old ，also there are some people who say it’s not easy to say.In my opinion, we should help the old people , because we all have parents, and we will grow old one day. If all of us are not willing to give our hands, how can we ask others to help ourselves?

So I strongly call on people to show your love to the old, not only for others but also for ourselves.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文是以话题老人跌倒该不该扶，敢不敢扶为主题，题目以图画提供数据，通过细心观察图中的数字，表示不同人的观点，写作时要合理使用信息，弄清写作的意图，通过分析思考把握逻辑联系，找出主题并借助所给的文字，把图中的信息转化成文章。在表述自己的观点时，要合理并写出理由，最后要给出建议。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:Only a small percentage of people think they will help the old, while 42% of people refuse to help the old ，also there are some people who say it’s not easy to say。使用到了连词while以及定语从句。 If all of us are not willing to give our hands, how can we ask others to help ourselves?条件状语从句。In my opinion,call on ， not only for others but also for ourselves.等等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.考点：图画作文。