Question

书面表达（共1小题，计15分）

随着车辆的增加，城市交通越来越拥挤。假如你叫李敏，前不久和同学一起讨论了the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes。现在请你根据他们的观点和你自己的观点。给你的外籍老师Susan写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。

Advantages	Disadvantages	My opinion
Protect the environment	It’s slower than buses and cars
Be good for our health	It’s not suitable for a long trip
It’s cheap

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Susan,

We had a heated discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of using bikes recently.

Some students think it is useful. First of all, it is good to protect the environment. Second, riding a bike usually is good for our health. And for the last, it’s cheaper to buy a bike than a car. However, others have different opinions. In their opinion, it’s slower than buses and cars. What’s more, it’s not suitable for a long trip. It’s tiring. I think we should use bikes as much as possible. Because it’s an environmentally friendly way of transport. Further more，it’s proper exercise to ride bikes for about 30 minutes to an hour.

【解析】

试题分析：根据表格的内容可知这部分用一般现在时，主语用第三人称，第三列表达自己的观点，应该用第一人称。要注意主谓一致。

【亮点说明】短文层次清楚，句与句之间连贯性好。同时短文用了一些短语和句式，如: riding a bike usually is good for our health. What’s more,等。 提醒学生平时注意积累一些短语和句式，以便在写作中使用。

考点：提纲类作文。