Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了, 她为这次失败所困扰，无心学习。请你给她写一封电子邮件，建议她正确地看待达人秀节目，享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果；提醒她实现理想的途径有很多，只有努力才能获得成功；鼓励她好好学习，也不放弃个人爱好，开心地度过每一天。

要求：（1）包含以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

（2）字数：60 — 80词（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

（3）信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Lisa,

I’m sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. I’d like to share with you my thoughts on this matter.

Yes, talent shows may change one’s future. They offer the opportunity to show one’s talents, and give people a way to make their dreams come true. Since only some people are truly talented, there is no need to take the result too seriously. It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight. So just enjoy the process.

In addition, there are many ways to success, and only by working hard can you achieve your goals. As a teenager, you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time, which, without doubt, will enrich your future life.

Hope you’ll be happy every day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文叙述Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了, 她为这次失败所困扰，无心学习。写一封电子邮件来劝说她，所以句子的主语一般用第二人称，用适当的连词，要注意上下文的衔接，使用自己熟悉的句式，所写的句子符合英语语法。

写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：offer the opportunity to do sth;make one’s dreams come true;;as a teenager； spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time等，用了and连词，用了which引导的非限制定语从句，增加了文章的亮点。