Question

【题目】张燕是九年级学生。她父亲在一家公司工作，家里几乎天天来客人。他们在客厅高声谈笑，有时还一起打牌，弄出许多噪音。这种吵闹的环境使张燕无法集中精力学习。她不知道如何解决这个问题。请你帮她给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，谈谈她的烦恼并请王老师提出宝贵意见。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Wang，

My name is Zhan Yan. I’m a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.

My father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home. They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I can’t focus on my study. I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some suggestions? They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.

Best wishes！

Yours sincerely，

Zhang Yan

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如in a company，at the beginning of，come to my home，talk to sb.，each other，play cards，make noise，a lot of，focus on，how to do，deal with，offer sb. some suggestions等。而There are always many people coming to my home./ I don’t know how to deal with this problem.等多种非谓语动词结构的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。