题目内容
【题目】请根据以下要点,用约80个词介绍伟大的发明家爱迪生:
1.爱提问,上小学经常问一些奇怪的与学习无关的问题。
2.母亲只好把他领回家,并亲自教他。
3.他对科学很感兴趣,做很多零活,如卖报挣钱,建了一个小实验室。
4.一生中有许多发明,使人们生活更方便,例如,电灯。
【答案】Thomas Edison is a great inventor. When he was a child, he always asked his teacher many strange questions which had nothing to do with his lessons. His teacher felt angry, so his mother had to take him home and taught him by herself. Edison was very interested in science, and he did lots of jobs, such as selling newspaper to earn money to build a small lab for himself. In his life, there were many inventions which have been making our life more convenient.
【解析】
这是一篇材料作文,根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下伟大的发明家爱迪生。所提供的材料中列举了:1. 爱提问,上小学经常问一些奇怪的与学习无关的问题。 2. 母亲只好把他领回家,并亲自教他。 3. 他对科学很感兴趣,做很多零活,如卖报挣钱,建了一个小实验室。4. 一生中有许多发明,使人们生活更方便,例如,电灯。主要从这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时,人称为第三人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息,并适当发挥。写作时,避免使用汉语式的英语,尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确,表达要符合英语习惯,注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系,表达具有条理性。
【高分句型一】
When he was a child, he always asked his teacher many strange questions which had nothing to do with his lessons. 当他还是个孩子的时候,他总是问老师许多奇怪的问题,这些问题与他的功课无关。
句子which had nothing to do with his lessons. 是由which引导的定语从句。
【高分句型二】
In his life, there were many inventions which have been making our life more convenient. 在他的生活中,有许多发明使我们的生活更加方便。
句子which have been making our life more convenient. 是由which引导的定语从句。