Question

书面表达（15分）

同学们在一起同学三年，即将毕业，你想对同学和老师说些什么话呢？请以 I want to say goodbye to my teachers and classmates.为题写一篇80词左右的短文。

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear teachers and classmates，

How time flies! Three years has passed since we came here. And today I'll say goodbye to you. I'll remember our friendship and the happy moments we had together. These three years' experience is colorful and unforgettable in my life.

First, I want to thank all the teachers, though we have had some arguments, you have given me much knowledge in study and being a man. In fact, I have improved a lot with your help. Thank you with sincere feelings.

Second, I'd like to give my best wishes to my classmates. The classmates that haven't passed the exam should not give up. I know some of you are very able. Maybe you are too nervous to finish the exams. But there will be more chances and you can't miss them with any excuse. You will succeed sooner or later.

In a word, I want to express my best wishes to my teachers and classmates.

Good luck and wish you happiness.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文是以初三即将毕业为情景，在离开学校、老师和同学们的时候，应该对他们说些什么。这是一篇开放式的作文，这里面的内容都需要我们自己来完成。通过分析可知，毕业的时候，是一个离别的时候，这个时候对老师说的应该是感谢和祝福，感谢老师的辛勤培育；对同学们说的是过去三年在一起的回忆，还有对未来生活的期盼。所以我们要用正确的英语将这些感情正确的表达出来，句式表达要符合英语规范，语言要准确。当然我们要使用好的句式或者连词，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅。根据内容的需要，这篇短文中应该用一般现在时态或一般过去时态，注意不同时态的变化。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的范文。在初三毕业，即将离开学校、老师和同学们的时候，作者说出了自己的心里话。首先作者用How time flies开头，感慨时间飞逝，这个句子非常符合作文给出的情景。第一段作者主要是点题，要向老师和同学们告别了，These three years' experience is colorful and unforgettable in my life.这里的句子概括性比较强。第二段作者主要写了对老师们说的话，though we have had some arguments, you have given me much knowledge in study and being a man.，对老师表达的是感谢之情。接下来是对同学们说的话，有对落后同学的鼓励，You will succeed sooner or later。最后作者重申了主题，In a word, I want to express my best wishes to my teachers and classmates. Good luck and wish you happiness.再次向老师和同学告别，并表达了自己的美好祝愿。

考点：开放式作文。