Question

【题目】人生如旅，在你的成长过程中，许多人感动着你，影响着你。 “谁是我的英雄”，“我要成为什么样的人”，现在已经成了我们关注的热门话题。Spud Webb 的事迹深深地影响着我们青少年，最近我校正举行英语征文活动。请根据表格提供的信息完成征文。

Spud Webb基本信息	1. 个头矮小，但梦想成为NBA球员 2.曾参加选拔，但被拒绝 3.一开始不被注意，一直为梦想而奋斗 4. 1985年成为NBA球员
对我的影响	1. 我的梦想：工人，科学家，作家，艺术家，工程师……(自选一个)
	2.怎样实现自己的梦想 ①制定合适的人生计划 ②……

要求：

对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

字数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总字数。

Spud Webb is my hero and he has influenced me most .

Spud Webb was born in the USA, in 1963.

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Answer 1

【答案】The person who has influenced me most is SpudWebb.

Spud Webb was born in the USA. in 1963. He is short and small,but he is very smart. He loves sports very much,especially basketball. His dream was to join the NBA in the future. So he practised hard every day to make his dream come true. Finally,he successfully became a player of the NBA in 1985.

Why is Spud Webb successful? Because he has adream in his life. He always practises hard,and he tries his best to make it come true. At the same time,his parents give a great support to him.

Spud Webb is special to me because he has influenced me greatly. I have the same hobby as him.. Many people sayhe is not tall enough to be a basketball player,but Spud Webb sets a good example for me. I'm thirsty of becoming a great basketball player: I think I have to practise hard to make my dream come true.

Spud Webb’s success shows us that everyone can achieve their dream through hard working. I'm sure I will be successful like Spud Webb one day.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Spud Webb 的个人情况、事迹以及对我的影响。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：He is……，His dream was……，He always practices……，Spud Webb is……，I think…….等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。