题目内容
【题目】书面表达
中考后暑假即将开始,你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。请根据旅行社提供的信息,将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。
Britain | Australia | |||
Time | July 1 - July 14 | Time | August 15 -August 24 | |
Activities | visit the Buckingham Palace (白金汉宫) visit the British Museum (大 英博物馆) watch football matches … | Activities | visit the Sydney Opera House travel around the Gold Coast (黄金海岸) have fun with kangaroos and koalas … | |
Attention | changeable weather | Attention | winter | |
Cost | 20,000 yuan | Cost | 16,000 yuan | |
要求:
1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由;
2. 结合游玩国家的情况,自拟希望可以安排的活动,并提出1-2点出游的注意事项;
3. 文章不少于90词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范;
5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.
However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.
I hope I will have a good time there!
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。中考后暑假即将开始,你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。要求根据旅行社提供的信息将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;然后根据提示内容,列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达;然后紧扣要点,动笔写作。在写作时,注意连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性,要层次清楚,要点分明,中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。