Question

【题目】假如你是来自英国的交流学生Simon, 在扬州”烟花三月”旅游节期间参观了古城扬州。请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍你的游玩经历。

总体印象	1.环境 ...... 2........
? ? 著名景点 ? ?	瘦西湖 ?	湖上泛舟 ......
	东关街	品尝美食 ......
游玩感受	1. ...... 2. ......

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要求：

1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

参考词汇：瘦西湖 the Slender West Lake

A trip in Yangzhou

This March, I visited an ancient city---Yangzhou.

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Answer 1

【答案】A trip in Yangzhou

This March, I visited an ancient city---Yangzhou.

Yangzhou is a beautiful city. There are different kinds of plants everywhere. I can even smell the flowers and hear the birds sing. People in the city are always willing to help people in need.?

There are many places of interest in the city. The Slender West Lake and Dongguan Street are the most famous ones. I was happy to take a boat trip on the lake. There are so many different gardens along the lake that I can’t remember all their names now. In Dongguan Street, I enjoyed different kinds of local food best. I also bought a lot of souvenirs for my friends.

I think it is a good place for people to live in. I hope to visit it again and spend a longer holiday there.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以Simon的身份来介绍自己在扬州的游玩经历。题目中利用表格的形式列出了文章的提纲，包括：对扬州的总体印象、扬州的著名景点，如廋西湖、东关街以及介绍自己的感受。题目中只是列出了写作的提纲，里面具体的内容是需要学生们自己来进行补充的，这对于学生们来说是一个难点，要求学生们要充分发挥想象力，从自己对扬州的了解出发，组织语言，并串联成文。另一个难点是英语的表达，英语表达习惯和汉语是不一样的，包括语序、用词等，写作时，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达自己想要表达的内容。主干在前，修饰成分在后，正确使用be动词、非谓语动词、介词短语等，应符合英语的语法规范。还需要注意文章的连贯性，尽可能的使用较高级的句型、短语，提升文章的档次。