题目内容
【题目】书面表达。
当前,越来越多的孩子迷上电脑,但孩子们用电脑的情况怎样?用它们做什么?下表是对三个孩子使用电脑情况的小调查,请据此写一篇短文,向大家介绍一下。
People | What they usually do |
Jenny
| do homework,talk to her customers(have an online candy shop) |
Mike
| watch movies,search for information about his subjects |
Jim
| play computer games,talk with his friends |
要求:1.条理清楚、意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确;
2.50~60词。
【答案】例文
Jenny usually uses her computer to do her homework. She also talks to her customers because she has an online candy shop. Mike usually uses the computer to watch movies and search for information about his subjects. Jim usually plays computer games and talks with his friends on the computer.
【解析】
写作之前要1.审清题目,看看有哪些要求?哪些时态?人称?2.确定文章类型,记叙文?说明文?议论文?看图?还是应用文?3.确定时态,单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落,并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色,人称、时态、单复数一致等。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。书写时用到的短语、句型:uses to do talks to search for information about on the computer.来增加了文章的亮点。