Question

3．假如你是高一新生李华，在开学第一堂英语课上，用英语向大家作自我介绍：
    1．出生年月：1998年3月
    2．性格：
    3．爱好：
    4．特长：
    5．梦想：
注意：（1）词数80词左右；开头已给出，不计入总词数．
     （2）覆盖所有要点．结合个人情况适当发挥．
Hello，everyone!
  Myname is LiHua．I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．I was born in March 1998．My personality is more outgoing．I like to make friends with others，especially my classmates．I like
doing sports．Running is my favorite sport．So，I do best is to run it．I always remember that I was once a star of the class
running it．My dream is to become a teacher．I think，on the one hand，the teacher can achieve my teaching ideals，on the other
hand，I can also play with the kids，so I will be more happy．

Thankyou!

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文是一篇给出提纲的发言稿，内容是自我介绍，因此人称应该用第一人称I来写，在介绍自己的出生年月时，用一般过去时；在介绍自己的喜好等情况时，用一般现在时；在谈到自己的梦想时，用一般将来时或I want to do sth．等句型．
写作思路及要点：本篇发言稿的写作内容主要有：出生年月：1998年3月；性格；爱好；特长；梦想．给出的要点比较简单，需要我们结合实际情况，写出符合文章中心的句子．
重点句型及短语：
I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．我很高兴给大家做自我介绍．
I was born in March 1998．我出生于1998年3月．
Running is my favorite sport．跑步是我最喜欢的运动．
My dream is to become a teacher．我的梦想是成为一名老师．
On the one hand…on the other hand，一方面…另一方面…
play with the kids  和孩子们玩

解答 Hello，everyone!
My name is Li Hua．I'm very glad to introduce myself to you．＜自我介绍的开场白＞
I was born in March 1998．My personality is more outgoing．I like to make friends with others，especially my classmates．＜自己的性格＞I like doing sports．Running is my favorite sport．So，I do best is to run it．I always remember that I was once a
star of the class running it．＜爱好与特长＞My dream is to become a teacher．I think，on the one hand，the teacher can achieve my teaching ideals，on the other hand，I can also play with the kids，so I will be more happy．＜梦想＞
Thank you!

点评 针对此类自我介绍的演讲稿，在写作时首先要注意把要点表述清楚，完整，确保不缺失要点；其次要注意表达的准确性，也就是语气问题，注意演讲常用的句式．