Question

请你给班主任写一封推荐信，推荐 Li Lei 当班长。信中要对Li Lei进行全面介绍。

词数80-100。

1.16岁，九年级，外貌。

2.星座----，以及所代表的性格特征。

3.有许多个人特质：自信、勤奋、好学，成绩好。

4.乐于助人，常为我们讲解难题。

5.为人善良，不自私，能注意每个细节。

6.聪明、富于创意和想象力。

18th August

Dear Mr. Lu

We are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Lu

W e are writing to recommend Li Lei as our monitor. He is a 16-year-old good-looking boy .He is in Grade 9.His star sign is Leo, so he is so confident and hardworking that he often gets good marks in all the subjects .He is polite and helpful to others. When his classmates have any problems, they often ask him for help. He is kind, generous, so he has made many good friends. He is very clever, creative and imaginative. He often takes an active part in different activities. We all like him.

I think that Li Lei has all the qualities to be a good monitor .I hope you can agree with me.

Yours Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本书面表达是一封推荐信，首先应该注意书信的格式，然后注意推荐的是别人，所以人称应该用第三人称；本文的时态也应该尽可能用一般现在时；书写时，应该注意表达的逻辑性，尽量将提示内容表达的直观清晰，符合英语的表达习惯。本文中会用到这些单词或短语confident、hardworking、careful、kind、clever、creative、imaginative、help sb. to do等。

【亮点说明】这封信注意到了格式，时态，人称和固定词组搭配，还注意了连词的运用。句子的顺畅，符合英语的表达习惯。

考点：提纲类作文