Question

你的好朋友Linda， 现在面临很多压力，爸爸妈妈总是把她与其他同学相比较，因此她最近心情很不好。

请你给她写一封信，建议她1.与父母好好沟通，2.通过做运动，听音乐等方式学会放松。

要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，2. 70词左右。

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Answer 1

Hi! Linda, I am sad when I heard your question ten month ago, I have the some question as your classmates. I am very angry ,too! But I know she wants me to study harder and get better grades. So I communicate with my

mother。And now we are understand them. So you can try to communicate with your mother. Or you can try to listen to some quite music and watch some games to relax yourself. And I hope you become happy later!

【解析】

试题分析：根据题目要求可知，本文主要以第一人称书写，主要使用一般现在时态，在写作时可适当使用一些连接词，使文章前后连贯，符合逻辑。要注意把每个要点都表达出来，不可遗漏任何一个。

【亮点说明】本文中多次使用连词如and、or、so为文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。