Question

【题目】假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank 是一名美国中学生,打算今年暑假来南充旅游。请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一封email 给他介绍一下南充。

要求:1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；

2.必须包含思维导图所给的提示，并做适当发挥；

3.行文中不得出现真实人名，校名或地名（思维导图中提及的除外）；

4.词数：80-100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

Dear Frank,

I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation.___________________________________

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hope to see you!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Frank,

I’m glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation. Nanchong is a great city with a long history. You can watch North Sichuan Puppetry and know about Chen Shou, a well－known historian. He wrote a book called Records of the Three Kingdoms.

There are many places of interest in Nanchong. You can visit Langzhong Ancient City. The buildings are so amazing. And you can enjoy the fantastic Jialing River and the wonderful Mount Lingyun. If you want to relax yourself, make sure to try Zhangfei Beef, Clear Noodles in Chili Sauce and other delicious food. Besides, you can have fun and buy something special for your family and friends at Wangfujing Mall.

Hope to see you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。首先要先读懂思维导图。通过思维导图可知我们要介绍南充的美食，名胜，历史文化。美食包括张飞牛肉，川北凉粉；名胜包括阆州古城，嘉陵江；历史文化包括川北大木偶，三国志作者陈寿等。写作时不要遗漏要点，同时还要根据南充特点做必要的发挥。

写作亮点：这篇短文包含了所有要点,能围绕内容适当发挥，如：Besides, you can have fun and buy something special for your family and friends at Wangfujing Mall., 而且短文内容具体、丰富，如：You can watch North Sichuan Puppetry and know about Chen Shou, a well－known historian.，If you want to relax yourself, make sure to try Zhangfei Beef, Clear Noodles in Chili Sauce and other delicious food.等。短文还应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇, 句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚。