Question

写作 (计10分)

随着经济的发展，手机在我们日常生活中的使用日益广泛。而在学校中学生是否应该拥有手机，有些学生和老师拥有不同的观点。你们学校的English Newsletter正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。

 

	观点	理由
一些学生	赞成拥有	方便与家长联系； …
一些老师	反对拥有	有学生用手机玩游戏； 有学生用手机考试作弊； …
你的观 点	…	1 … 2. …

 

要 求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some students and teachers have different ideas about if the students should own their mobile phones at school.

Some students think that they may have their own mobile phones. If so, they can contact their parents when necessary. On the other hand, they can read news with it. Besides that, they can easily search for information they need.

However, some teachers are against it. They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. What’s worse, students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time.

In my opinion, students needn’t own mobile phones. We must focus on our study. Even if we need call somebody, we can ask our teachers for help.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。结合材料可知本文主要是第三人称，时态主要用一般现在时。为了使表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读材料，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。

【亮点说明】文中使用了一些固定句型短语，为文章增色不少。如On the other hand,另一方面；What’s worse更糟糕的是；In my opinion在我看来；They think that students not only play games but also send answers to each other in exams with mobile phones. 他们认为，学生不仅玩游戏也将用手机在考试时互相传递答案。students spend too much time on them at night so that they are sleepy in class in the day time. 学生花太多时间在晚上，他们经常在白天的课堂上睡觉。等等。

考点：提纲作文。