Question

【题目】“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造

某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受

提示词语: diligence (勤奋), make progress, effort, proud

提示问题: What did you achieve by working hard?

What did you do to make it?

How did you feel about it?

Answer 1

【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.

It was so great that all my efforts paid off. I felt so proud of myself.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？你是怎么做到的？你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。

句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是由because引导的原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。

这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。