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【题目】书面表达。

新学期班上来了一位叫韩梅的新同学，她在班级英语俱乐部QQ群里留言，谈到了她进入新学校后在学习，生活和与人相处等多个方面遇到的问题，并向大家寻求帮助。假设你是她的同班同学李华，请你写封信给她，给出相应的建议并分享你的经验以帮助她尽快适应新的学习和生活环境。

Hi, everybody. How’s it going? I’ve been your new classmates since this September. I’m very happy, but I’m worried that I may meet with some difficulties in the new school. Perhaps I can’t keep up with（赶上）my classmates, especially in English. And I’m not sure if I can make friends with others because I’m not good at communicating. On the other hand, I don’t know how to take good care of myself. I’m afraid the food in the new school won’t agree with me. What can I do with these problems? Could you give me some advice? I really need your help.

Yours,

Han Mei

Hi, everybody. How’s it going? I’ve been your new classmates since this September. I’m very happy, but I’m worried that I may meet with some difficulties in the new school. Perhaps I can’t keep up with（赶上）my classmates, especially in English. And I’m not sure if I can make friends with others because I’m not good at communicating. On the other hand, I don’t know how to take good care of myself. I’m afraid the food in the new school won’t agree with me. What can I do with these problems? Could you give me some advice? I really need your help.

Yours,

Han Mei

1. 注意：词数：80~120词左右；

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校名称；

3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Han Mei,

Welcome to our class. I’ve learned about your problems, and here is some advice for you to deal with them. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Han Mei,

Welcome to our class. I’ve learned about your problems, and here is some advice for you to deal with them.

For English, I think you should recite the English carefully and understand the grammer.Then you can practice doing some exercises about it.If you have some problems,you can ask your teacher.

It is not hard to communicate with your classmates for you have a lot in common. So I suggest you open your heart and talk with them frankly and sincerely.When you show your kindness to them,you will find that they are really lovely and easy to get along with.And you will soon make many friends.

Our school has a variety of food for students, you can choose as much as you like food, I believe you will soon adapt to the new school life, I hope my advice can help you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇书信作文，假设你是李华，要求你给你的新同学韩梅写一封信，给她一些关于学习、生活和与人相处等多个方面的建议并分享你的经验以帮助她尽快适应新的学习和生活环境。首先要注意书信的格式，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时，人称主要为第一人称和第二人称。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。