题目内容
【题目】书面表达 (共5分)
根据所给要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,词数在60个左右,最后‘我希望…’部分,请用2~3句展开合理发挥。内容要点如下:
1.桂林是我国最美丽的城市之一;游客在任何季节可以去那里。
2.去年夏天我和家人乘飞机去桂林度假;
3.我们在那里游览了很多名胜,例如漓江(Li River), 欣赏了美丽的自然风景;
4.拍了许多照片;我们为亲友买了很多礼物。
5.虽然感觉有点累,但是玩得很开心。我希望…
【答案】
Guilin is in the north of Guangxi.The population in the city of Guilin is more than six hundred thousand. There are famous and beautiful sceneries in Guilin. It is one of the most beautiful cities in our country. Visitors can go there in any season.
Last year I went to Guilin on vacation. We visited many places of interest, such as the Li River. We took a boat to see the beautiful natural scenes of the Li River and took a lot of photos. We bought many presents for my relatives. Although we got tired but we were very happy. I hope you can also visit Guilin.. I’m sure you will enjoy yourself if you go to Guilin.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态和一般过去时来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:这篇短文多次使用主从复合句如:Although we got tired but we were very hanppy. I hope you can also visit Guilin.. I’m sure you will enjoy yourself if you go to Guilin.等等为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。