Question

你在美国的笔友Sam 二月份要来北京游玩，他向你了解北京有哪些地方可参观。请根据要求用e-mail向他作介绍。

词数100左右。开头已给出，不计词数，尽量用上以下提示词

提示：capital, tourist attraction, the Forbidden City, the Imperial Palace, the Summer Palace, spend summer time, Beihai Park, the Great Wall, one of the seven wonders, be proud of

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

I’m very glad to hear that you will have a chance to come to Beijing. Beijing is the capital of China. It’s an old city with a long history. There are so many tourist attractions in Beijing. You can visit the Forbidden City which was the Imperial Palace in Qing dynasty. The Summer Palace is also a good place to visit. It’s the place that emperors and their family spent summer time there. It’s so beautiful that people often lose themselves in it. You can go round other places of interest as well, such as Beihai Park. But among those, the Great Wall which is one of the seven wonders in the world may be the most famous one. It’s worth visiting. We Chinese are very proud of it.

I can show you around Beijing when you come. I’m looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文。题目中给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应根据话题内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，句式，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。结合话题可知本文时态一般应该用一般现在时，注意情态动词后面动词用原形。为了使表达更有逻辑性，可以使用连接词等。此类作文首先要做的就是认真阅读题目，不能跑题偏题。写作中注意一些基础的写作常识，不犯低级错误。只要平时积累足够，就一定能获得满意的分数。另外为了应付考试，可以有选择的背诵一些范文，这样应考时就会有法可依。

【亮点说明】亮点一：But among those, the Great Wall which is one of the seven wonders in the world may be the most famous one. 但在其中，长城是世界七大奇迹之一，也可能是最有名的一个。

亮点二：It’s worth visiting.。这是值得一游的。

亮点三：We Chinese are very proud of it. 我们中国人都为它而非常自豪。

亮点四：I can show you around Beijing when you come。你来的时候我可以带你参观北京。

亮点五：I’m looking forward to meeting you as soon as possible.我期待着尽快见到你。

考点：话题作文。