Question

17．假如你们学校正在举办电影周，同学们昨天观看了一部动画片《极速蜗牛》（Turbo），写一篇80词左右的英语观后感，内容提示如下：
1．影片由好莱坞（Hollywood）出品，讲述了一只叫Turbo的蜗牛的故事．
2．他拥有一个梦想--成为世界上跑得最快的蜗牛（snail），为此他每天努力练习；
3．他的朋友们都嘲笑他，但是他对他们的话不在意，最终获得成功．
4．我们每个人都有着自己的梦想…
注意：1观后感须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯
2．第4要点的内容须用2-3句话展开想象，做适当发挥
3．词数80左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
We watched a cartoon called Turbo yesterday．It is produced by Hollywood．The film tells a story of a snail called Turbo．He has a dream．He wants to be the fastest snail in the world．To realize his dream，he practises hard every day．All his friends laugh at him，but he doesn't care about their words．At last，he becomes successful．Each of us has a dream． Some dreams are big and others are small．Anyway，we should take action to make it come true．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To realize his dream，he practices running every day．
句中不定式短语"To realize his dream"作目的状语，"practice doing sth"意为"练习做某事"．这句话意为：为了实现他的梦想，他每天练习跑步．
高分句型二：
Anyway，we should take action to make it come true．
句中"anyway"意为"无论如何"；"take action to　do　sth"意为"采取行动做某事"；"come　true"意为"实现"．这句话意为：无论如何，我们应该采取行动来让它实现．

解答 We watched a cartoon called Turbo yesterday．It is produced by Hollywood．The film tells a story of a snail called Turbo．（介绍影片）He has a dream．He wants to be the fastest snail in the world．To realize his dream，he practices running every day．【高分句型一】All his friends laugh at him，but he doesn't care about their words．At last，he becomes successful．（蜗牛的故事）Each of us has a dream． Some dreams are big and others are small．Anyway，we should take action to make it come true．【高分句型二】（我的观点）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．