Question

书面表达（5分）

请根据下列要点，写一篇短文，意思通顺。Lucy是我最好的朋友，看起来很惹人喜爱。上个月，她参加了DIY方面的课程，擅长做水果沙拉。经常关心他人，从不说别人的坏话。她有一副好嗓子，长大后想成为一名杰出的歌手。她希望和家人环游世界并更多地了解这个世界。

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My best friend

Lucy is my best friend. She looks sweet. Last month，she took a course in DIY and she is good at making a fruit salad. She often cares about others. She never says a bad word about others. She has a good voice and wants to be an excellent singer when she grows up. She hopes she will travel around the world with her family and learn more about the world.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲类作文。