Question

根据下列提示要点写一篇约70词左右的英语短文，要点如下：

Justin Timeberlake小时候喜欢表演，看电影; 梦想成为一名著名的演员。在校期间，努力学习。23岁时,实现了自己的梦想。到2012年止，主演了十几部电影，拥有成千上万的影迷。成名之后，把更多的时间和金钱投入到了慈善事业。因此，他被人们爱戴。

Answer 1

Justin Timeberlake liked watching movies and acting when he was a child. He dreamed of being a famous actor at that time.He studied hard during school.At age of 23,his dream came true and he was known for his success.He played roles in all kinds of movies and acted over 10 movies.He owned thousands of fans and they liked him very much.He devoted himself to the society and gave more time and money to the charity.Just for this,he was respected from then on.

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试题分析：

试题分析：本书面表达，是介绍贾斯汀·汀布莱克先生，所以本文的人称应该是第三人称，在完成句子是应特别注意动词的过去式，如had 、was、lived、liked等。在写作时，要尽量利用上所给的提示内容，表达时应使句型顺畅并符合英语的习惯表达方法。注意连词的运用，尽量少用排比句，因为英语最忌讳重复。

【亮点说明】1. 本文紧扣要求对Justin Timeberlake做了简单介绍，内容完整。

2.时态正确。注意用到了一般过去时。比如he dreamed…he studied…he devoted…

3.层次清楚，有头有尾。