Question

【题目】情景作文

初中生活马上就要结束了,三年的时光一定给你留下了很多挥之不去的记忆,请你根据图表提示简要描述这段时间的学习生活情况。

要求：1. 80词左右，开头已给出，

不计入词数。

2. 语法正确，文理通顺，流畅。

3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名。

My Life in Junior Middle School

I have studied in my junior middle school for three years. My life in junior middle school was rich and I have learned a lot.

Answer 1

【答案】My Life in Junior Middle School

I have studied in my junior middle school for three years. My life in junior middle school was rich and I have learned a lot. I have made a lot of friends in my school. They often helped me when I was in trouble. Our teachers were friendly and patient, especially my English teacher. She often helped me with my English. So my favorite subject was English. I liked sports. In my free time, I often played basketball or football with friends. It was good for health and it is a good way to relax from the busy study.

In a word, my life in junior middle school was colorful and unforgettable.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们根据提示描述自己初中的学习和生活，题目中利用图表的形式列出了文章的提纲，包括：美丽的学校、友好的同学、最喜欢的老师和最喜欢的运动。我们应从这四个方面出发，组织语言，充实内容，串联成文。通过分析可知，文章介绍的是已经结束的初中生活，因此这篇短文应使用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的形式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化。写作时还应注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子整体结构考虑，写完整的句子，以常见的主谓宾结构和主系表结构为主。为提升文章档次，可以穿插使用并列句或复合句，如宾语从句、状语从句等。也可使用一些高级句式和短语，如倒装、被动语态、感叹句等。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。