Question

【题目】假设你们中学要举行一次毕业典礼，你是一名优秀的毕业生，学校安排你在会上做演讲，谈谈你的学习体会。

要求：1.词数80个左右。

2.用下面所给提示词语，条理清晰，意思连贯，标点正确。

提示词：graduate, Excellent Student Award, help each other, way, keep on, come true

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Answer 1

【答案】Hello, everyone. Thank you for giving me the Excellent Student Award. I’m happy to talk about my studies. Thinking back to the past three years, what I remember is to learn something from anyone among us, because everybody has his or her own good ways. We should learn from and help each other. We must pay attention to the way we study, too. We will graduate, but I think we shouldn’t stop learning. We need to keep on working hard to become excellent people and make our dreams come true.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，谈谈你的学习体会。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如thank you for, be happy to, talk about, think back, pay attention to, too, stop doing, keep on doing以及come true等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。