Question

【题目】请以My Future Life 为题写一篇短文谈谈你未来的生活。
写作要求：
1). 注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范。
2). 不得使用真实姓名和学校。
3). 词数不少于60。

Answer 1

【答案】My Future Life

As time goes by, there are going to be big changes in our everyday life. For example, when we are hungry, we don't need to cook in a hurry. Just take some pills, and everything will be OK. When we are free, we can go anywhere by spacecraft. It will be very cheap, just like taking a taxi now. And of course, if we want to see what is like under the sea, just travel down there in a flying object like UFO. Maybe there will be a lot of cities and people living there. I think it'll be very easy to travel anywhere, not only in our world, but also in space and in the deep sea.

【解析】这是一篇话题作文。本文只给出了话题，我们要做的就是发挥想象用正确的英语把这些想象内容表达出来。根据话题内容可知本文主要是一般将来时态，主语是第一人称，注意时态与时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如: As time goes by随着时间的流逝。when we are hungry, we don't need to cook in a hurry当我们饿了，我们不必匆忙做饭。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语。写作时就可以适当引用。使文章的表达更有逻辑性。更富有条理。