Question

【题目】假设你交了一个叫Tom的笔友,请你介绍一下他的情况,写一篇50词左右的短文。提示：1） 他的国籍及年龄2） 他的家庭情况 3） 他的理想工作及理由

Answer 1

【答案】I have a pen pal in Canada. His name is Tom, he is 15 years old. Tom is a clever boy, so he can speak three languages. There are four people in his family, they are his parents, his sister and him. Tom's father is a doctor, he always helps others and he likes his job very much. His mother is a teacher, she teaches math in a middle school and the students all like her. Tom's parents want him to be a teacher, too. But Tom don't like it, he doesn't like children. He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it's very exciting and interesting.
【解析】这是话题作文，本文结构紧凑,准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯,运用了so, but等连词进行衔接。同时,本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如He wants to be a policeman. He thinks it's very exciting and interesting.等。