Question

6．近期，随着"二孩政策"的开放，生不生二胎以及生二胎对第一个孩子的影响引起了大家的广泛讨论．假设你是中学生Tom，请结合以下提示，给表编辑部写一份邮件表达你对此事的观点和你的做法．
1．look after； be very happy
2．play with； not feel lonely
3．have more freedom； make life more colourful
要求：1．语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；
2．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3．词数：80词左右．
4．a second child 二孩
Dear editor，
I hear that a hot topic about whether a second child should be allowed or not is under discussion．
                                                                                        
Yours，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
In my opinion，if there are two children in a family，they can look after each other and help each other，especially when they have difficulties．在我看来，如果一个家庭里有两个孩子，他们可以互相照看，互相帮助，特别是遇到困难的时候．in one's opinion是固定短语，意思是"在某人看来"look after是固定短语，意思是"照看"，when引导的时间状语从句．
高分句型二：
 In the eyes of the western people，it is unfair to bring only one child to the world，without any brothers or sisters．在西方人眼里，如果把一个孩子带到这个世界上，没有兄弟姐妹，这是不公平的．it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式短语to bring only one child to the world，without any brothers or sisters．

解答 Dear editor，
I hear that a hot topic about whether a second child should be allowed or not is under discussion．In my opinion，if there are two children in a family，they can look after each other and help each other，especially when they have difficulties．【高分句型一】（两个孩子的好处）That is very happy．Besides，the two children can play with each other and won't feel lonely．In the eyes of the western people，it is unfair to bring only one child to the world，without any brothers or sisters．【高分句型二】（西方人的观点）What can he or she talk with when his of her parents die？Whom can he or she ask help from？So a second child is good for the family and the society．

点评 首先要仔细审题，注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．