Question

【题目】作文

梦想家园房产公司为了激发中学生创意灵感，提高学习英语的热情，举办了题为“My Dream Home”的演讲比赛。请你根据下表中所提供的信息，完成演讲稿。

房子大	有2层，可以和家人住在一起；后面有花园
房间多	至少8个房间；一层有厨房、卧室……；二层 有浴室、书房……
很舒适	可以和朋友在家聚会；放学后在书房做作 业；早上在花园读书
其他	1. …… 2. ……

要求：

1. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；

2. 要点须包括表格中的信息，但不要使用真实姓名和校名等;

3. 词数：不少于70词。演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

Ladies and Gentlemen,

I'd like to tell you about my dream home.

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

That's all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Ladies and Gentlemen,

I'd like to tell you about my dream home. It is a large house in the country. It has two floors. My family can live together. There is a garden behind the house.

There are at least 8 rooms. On the first floor there is a kitchen, a dining room, a sitting room and a bedroom. On the second floor there are two bedrooms, a bathroom and a study.

My dream home is very comfortable. After school I do my homework in the study. In the morning I read books in the garden and I can also grow some flowers in it. I can ask my friends to have parties, watch films or play games together in the house. It is great

fun! I love my home.

That's all. Thank you!

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇演讲稿，结合所给材料，要把表格里的内容有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了in the country, at least，on the first floor, after school，and, grow some flowers，ask sb. to do sth.等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了there be句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。