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2．在今年的"地球一小时（Earth Hour）"活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自觉 熄灯一小时，体现了低碳生活的新理念．假定你是CCTV9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息用英语写一篇80个词左右的新闻稿．注意：部分内容已为你写好，不计入总词数．

Thank you for joining CCTV's Around China show！Now it's 8：45p．m．during the famous Earth Hour．People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time．In Shanghai，
some people are taking a walk with their family．They feel very relaxed．In Beijing，some people are having a nice talk with their friends．And in Ningbo，some young people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also enjoy themselves．
Many people share with us their plans．Some say they will spend more time with their family and friends．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．What's more，some people tell me that they will use paper both sides （ drive less，ride bikes，use plastic bags less…） in their daily life．
Many people share with us their plans．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是为"地球一小时（Earth Hour）"活动写一篇采访新闻稿．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．人们正在做什么：（1）上海：和家人散步；（2）北京：和朋友愉快交谈；（3）宁波：公园里举行聚会
2．人们打算做什么：（1）改变生活方式：花更多的时间和家人朋友一起．（2）保护环境：种更多的树；节约用纸，两面纸都使用
常用到的重点短语：
take a walk散步
enjoy oneself 玩得开心
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
what's more再者

【高分句型】
1．①Without lights，people can also ②enjoy themselves．
①without（表否定）没有，无，不需．
②enjoy oneself 玩得开心，相当于have a good time．
2．①What's more，some people tell me②that they will use paper both sides  in their daily life．
①what's more再者．
②that作为引导词的宾语从句，作为tell的宾语．

解答 Thank you for joining CCTY's Around China show！Now it's 8：45 p．m．during the famous Earth Hour．People in many cities have turned off their lights are having a very special time．In Shanghai，some people are taking a walk with their family．They feel very relaxed．In Beijing，some people are having a nice talk with their friends．And in Ningbo，some young people are holding a party in the park，singing and dancing．Without lights，people can also enjoy themselves．【高分句型】（人们正在做什么）
Many people share with us their plans．Some say they will spend more time with their family and friends．Others say they will try their best to protect the environment，like planting more trees，saving water and so on．What's more，some people tell me that they will use paper both sides  in their daily life．【高分句型】（人们打算做什么）

点评 本图表所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是把这些内容用正确的英语表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并需有适当发挥．要注意句式的多样性，适当的使用宾语从句，转折词however，连词and等．考生可在作文之前对每部分列出大致的提纲，做到主题明确，条理清楚．可以根据所给提纲或已知信息列出每段的主题句，为全文的展开做好铺垫．注意行文连贯，书写规范，不要出现一些诸如语法或词汇的错误．