Question

Writing 10(2011 清远)

A.信息归纳

    请阅读下面这篇文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。

    Last Tuesday,a little girl died after eating some fried chicken. Her father bought the chicken for her from a street seller in Fenzhuang Village,Fengtai,Beijing. After testing the girl,the doctor said she was poisoned (中毒) by nitrites (亚硝酸盐) .Some experts suggest that we should buy foods with QS signs.They are safer.

    After hearing about the accident,many people feel more worried about the food safety because there have been many food safety probems in our country these years. For example,poisonous (有毒的) rice,oil,milk and so on have been found out recently. People feel quite afraid because these poisonous foods are rather bad for their health and even kill them.They want the government to do something to stop such poisonous foods and drinks appearing again so that they can have safe and healthy foods and drinks.

                          Information Card

l.The little girl died after she ate       .

2. Some experts suggest that we sh ould buy foods with      .

3. Many people feel   about the food safety after hearing about the accident.

4.The poisonous foods are       for people’s health and even kill them.

5.The people want      to stop such poisonous foods and drinks appearing again.

B. 书面表达

     现在，食品安全是人们关注和担心的一个问题，我们怎样才能够确保安全饮食呢？请你以“Eating Safely”为题就以下问题发表你的见解：1.在哪里就餐？ 2.如何烹饪食物？ 3.购买怎样的食品？

[写作要求]   全文80词左右，文中至少列举2〜3点建议。

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  

Answer 1

Writing 10

A. 信息归纳

[语篇解读]本文是一篇新闻报道。一个小女孩的死亡，使人们更加 担心食品安全，民众呼吁政府采取措施加强食品安全。

1. some fried chicken 由文章首句可知，这个小女孩是由于吃fried chicken而死亡的。

2. QS signs由第一段结尾可知，要买具有食品质量合格检测标志的食品。

3. more worried 由文章第二段首句feel more worried可知，人们对食品 安全更加担忧了。

4. rather bad由文章最后一'段倒数第二句... because these poisonous foods are rather bad for their health…可知，应该是 rather bad。

5. the government由文章最后一句可知，应该是人们想让政府阻止有 毒的食品饮料再次出现。

B. 书面表达 [写作要点]

1. 本文是一篇说明文。要写的内容是饮食安全的注意事项，所以 可能用到一般现在时，要注意文章的条理性。

2. 内容要点：

  ① 在哪儿饮食最安全。

  ② 怎样烹饪食物。

  ③ 购买什么样的食品是安全的。

[参考范文]

                             Eating Safely 

     Nowadays,many people are more and more worried about the food safety because there have been many food safety problems in the world.How to eat safely? Here are my suggestions.

     First,we’d better eat at home and try not to eat outside. Second,we should cook the foods properly because some uncooked foods are not good for us. Third,it’s safer to buy foods with QS signs because there’s always something wrong with most of the foods without QS signs.

     If you can follow these suggestions,! think you can eat healthily.